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	<description>a writer in search of zen-like clam</description>
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		<title>By: Julie</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9393</link>
		<dc:creator>Julie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2007 19:36:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>They certainly are not conjured Lynne!  Lots of sweat, effort, and my telling myself I suck.

I started this blog precisely so I could look back over how I write, and remind myself that the lows are balanced out by the highs!

Pip, I must try JL&#039;s cakes.

Liz, you&#039;re right, it&#039;s fun to write first person, but you do get stuck in that head.

Michelle...yup.  Just write.  The best advice ever.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>They certainly are not conjured Lynne!  Lots of sweat, effort, and my telling myself I suck.</p>
<p>I started this blog precisely so I could look back over how I write, and remind myself that the lows are balanced out by the highs!</p>
<p>Pip, I must try JL&#8217;s cakes.</p>
<p>Liz, you&#8217;re right, it&#8217;s fun to write first person, but you do get stuck in that head.</p>
<p>Michelle&#8230;yup.  Just write.  The best advice ever.</p>
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		<title>By: Lynne</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9383</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2007 13:14:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s good to hear you&#039;ve problems Julie, not because I want you to have problems, but because I&#039;ve invariably got something similar, or similar in depth if not content, and it&#039;s so lovely to read your finished work and you&#039;d just never tell it gave you any difficulties at all. They read like the were conjoured out of thin air straight into the magial stories they are. I&#039;m sure this one will too.
I&#039;m really enjoying Driving Him Wild at present.
Do you ever look back at your old writing blog and remember that journey?
Lynne.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s good to hear you&#8217;ve problems Julie, not because I want you to have problems, but because I&#8217;ve invariably got something similar, or similar in depth if not content, and it&#8217;s so lovely to read your finished work and you&#8217;d just never tell it gave you any difficulties at all. They read like the were conjoured out of thin air straight into the magial stories they are. I&#8217;m sure this one will too.<br />
I&#8217;m really enjoying Driving Him Wild at present.<br />
Do you ever look back at your old writing blog and remember that journey?<br />
Lynne.</p>
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		<title>By: Phillipa Ashley</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9344</link>
		<dc:creator>Phillipa Ashley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2007 15:50:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;ll be alright on the night Julie... (says she, who has the crows right on her head at the moment). I like John Lewis too as they have nice cakes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;ll be alright on the night Julie&#8230; (says she, who has the crows right on her head at the moment). I like John Lewis too as they have nice cakes.</p>
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		<title>By: Liz Fielding</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9330</link>
		<dc:creator>Liz Fielding</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2007 18:17:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can&#039;t help you wish writing advice -- I don&#039;t know how I do it -- but I clearly remember the downside of writing first person is that when you write yourself into a corner you can&#039;t just move the action across town to find out what the hero is doing.

But I still loved doing it.  Good luck!

Liz</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can&#8217;t help you wish writing advice &#8212; I don&#8217;t know how I do it &#8212; but I clearly remember the downside of writing first person is that when you write yourself into a corner you can&#8217;t just move the action across town to find out what the hero is doing.</p>
<p>But I still loved doing it.  Good luck!</p>
<p>Liz</p>
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		<title>By: Michelle Styles</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9308</link>
		<dc:creator>Michelle Styles</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2007 12:34:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just write the book. Trust your instinct. Then when you are finished, you can go back and make sure everything is okay -- and the balance is correct. BUT right now, you simply needto write. Says she with a deadline at the end of the month and the book 2/3 written.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just write the book. Trust your instinct. Then when you are finished, you can go back and make sure everything is okay &#8212; and the balance is correct. BUT right now, you simply needto write. Says she with a deadline at the end of the month and the book 2/3 written.</p>
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		<title>By: Julie</title>
		<link>http://www.julie-cohen.com/blog/2007/03/01/pacing/comment-page-1/#comment-9302</link>
		<dc:creator>Julie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2007 09:17:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That is sound structural advice, Jess.  The thing is, that the whole reason for the plot strand is to give the heroine an  insight into her own emotions that she&#039;ll need at the end of the book.  I just can&#039;t figure out how much space to give it.  Argh!

Maybe you&#039;re right--three-quarters of the way is the place.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That is sound structural advice, Jess.  The thing is, that the whole reason for the plot strand is to give the heroine an  insight into her own emotions that she&#8217;ll need at the end of the book.  I just can&#8217;t figure out how much space to give it.  Argh!</p>
<p>Maybe you&#8217;re right&#8211;three-quarters of the way is the place.</p>
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		<title>By: Jessica Raymond</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jessica Raymond</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2007 09:14:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writing a la JK Rowling, I like it :)

Maybe you could wrap up the plot strand that you&#039;re not sure what to do with at a midway/three-quarters point where the pacing dips a little? Just a thought, feel free to ignore...

Jess x</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing a la JK Rowling, I like it <img src='http://www.julie-cohen.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Maybe you could wrap up the plot strand that you&#8217;re not sure what to do with at a midway/three-quarters point where the pacing dips a little? Just a thought, feel free to ignore&#8230;</p>
<p>Jess x</p>
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